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THE WAS SUPER FUNNY. I Love beeboo, you sure know how to make a guy laugh. HERE COMES THE TORPEDO!
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He gets shot in the head and LIVES?!!?!?!?!?
BTW the guy was scarier then the Zombie LOL
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"Original, Just missing a few things."
I would have to say you had great animation and drawings. However you are missing several critical keys that practically gives the story a life.
1) The Problem - Without the problem there would be no action, no humor. I basically saw a wizard just zap stuff in the air
2) The Conflict - This is normally the climax of the scene, to prevent the audience from getting bored to death, this should be placed. I confess that i felt bored towards the end of your flash. Imagine if it was longer dam i would have slept (good thing u kept it short so others would barely notice it)
3) Story Line - What was the story line? This is the essence in practically everything a flash should be made out off.
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It absolutely loved the final fantasy 7 scene, it was hillarious = 3/3
Donkey Kong made me giggle, but then i found it to be extremely boring = 1/3
The last wasnt funny at all = 0/3
I saw effort put into this (and i liked the song at the menu list) it showed a spark of your originality = 1/1
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Omg that was really sick! Thats y ill give u a 10/10 and a 5/5! :D
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Its cool, if u dont respond i will cry. WHAT WAS THE DECODED MESSAGE?
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"Yoshi can sure take a beating"
LMAO, Yoshi kicks butt hard. I loved the egg scene it was my fav :P
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By far the most scariest thing ive seen!
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Good Points: Amazing Graphics (one of the best ive seen), it had a huge diversity of well drawn and animated characters 2/2
The Music accompanied the movie. 2/2
It gave me the sense of serenity and nature, and was briefly funny 2/2
Mistakes: It lacked a good story line, i had difficulty identifying the conflict, maybe it should be more interesting and clearer. Maybe create a fight scene or a thrilling scene with a beast. 1/2
It was slightly boring, the energy level of this movie wasn't really high, it was high and the beggining and the end, but when there was no action, the scene really died down. Try focusing on creating one major action scene, perhaps a fight scene or an area to create a major conflict.1/2
Overall it was great work, definitely worth my time. 8/10, 4/5
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Animation wasnt that great. But the cool music and sweet story line compensated for it. Congratulations on a work well done.
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